Okay dude listen.

there would be TONS of people intrested in reading this story if you only continued. You HAVE to let peple know what happens...please *puppy dog eyes*

LOL

but in all seriousness you. should. continue. ON.

THIS IS SICK! I wish you would have continued this. It gave me chills! :D

Wow! That was good. This looks very interesting.

It's incredibly good idea but I have to admit it's slightly creepy! Please continue with this as I want to know where this is going.

Wow, very cool. I'm looking forward to reading more of this. It's looking pretty good so far

I think this story has amazing potential, and i love the story line so far. Keep it up