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| behind the velvet curtain 2007-03-15 ch 1,   | I really like this. It's so real, and I love the flow... "Let’s laugh and joke about slitting our wrists, About shooting our brains out, About o.d.ing to get out of school work and Pretend to not see the kid in the corner Trying not to cry about our remarks." (^ I'd be the one in the corner.) |
| Shandiin 2007-03-15 ch 1, | That's a pretty strong poem. I personally hate teen agers and having to be one and live among them. I loved the topic. -Agadinmar |