ehh the rhyming wa le shaky..

but the overall poem itself was cute.

I liked it.

this happens way too much.

I can think of someone I love

but we don't really talk anymore.

And I still have so much to say..

good job.

Wow. I adored this. It was totally beautiful, and I feel like this so much. Unfortunately he doesn't. That is life sometimes. But this was wonderful, great job!

Really, really nice job.

Thanks for all the reviews!

Rowan.

This poem is really cute! I really like it.

"They pass each other everyday

With so much they wish they could say..."

I really liked those lines :)