I know it's a bit late to review, but this story is too much for me to NOT review.
I purposely got an account so I could say this:
I'm not sure if you do or do not want to hear this, but I'm so sorry. Then again, from our own suffering we become stronger.

I don't really think you need an editor, but I'd love to help you if you decide to continue this. I feel it would be a strong story and that it needs to be written. It probably caused you a bit of struggling to be able to write this, even if you might not agree, but I know I would have.

I hope you continue this.

With regards,
M.A.D.

This was so well written, i just loved it! there weren't enough mistakes to need an editor! i hope you continue it...unless you want to leave it at that, it would be great either way! (But really, continue :P)

= From The Earthen Ground =

this is VERY well written, and so sad.

on a personal note, i've been on lamictal for bipolar. i refused to take it after a while because it tastes like shit.

This is so sad, it's very well written. It must have been painful for you to put it all out on paper (well, a word document but you know what I mean).