   Outsider Looking In 2009-04-13 . chapter 7I love it! I wish you would update it, it is truly great! |
 Kris St. James 2007-10-03 . chapter 1 LOL! What a charmer she is! I really like your character names (Willow and Lily). I may steal Willow sometime. I like the imagery and the tone. It really sets up the story for some interesting conflict (and hopefully resolution) later. Nice descriptions, too. Some of the commentary is awkward. It didn't read smoothly in places (ex: Blond hair that was a big shaggy had some dirty blond in it.)
What happens next? |
 Opal Fairy 2007-05-31 . chapter 7Cool I like this story. Interested to see where its going too. Love Willows character she's so sassy and sarchi. Update soon. |
 lizzeril 2007-05-26 . chapter 6you know, i really like your story... and i am looking forward to reading a new chapter!! so please update quickly... :) |
| Lacey 2007-05-05 . chapter 5 AWESOME! plz update ! |
| dreamer 2007-04-15 . chapter 1 this sounds a lot like reason and romance just not as good... |
 A Dizzy Dingo 2007-03-28 . chapter 2yay!! another chappie? |
 1-33 pm 2007-03-17 . chapter 2you must update soon!
from the first chapter i knew this was going to be a good story, but when you added Vanessa it just completes everything so hilariously!
i almost fell off my chair laughing at "Please, don't kill her!" parts!
can't wait to read more.
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1:33 p.m. |
 Beautiful Pixie 2007-03-16 . chapter 1oh my gosh, this should be an interesting tale. |
| A Dizzy Dingo 2007-03-15 . chapter 1 -gonk- I love it! -tear- more? asap? |
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