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| Orual 2007-03-19 ch 1, | Wow. That last stanza was hard-hitting, to say the least. That is the sort of poetry that makes the reader squirm. The man saying "useless" reminds me of the preacher calling "vanity." A reminder of Ecclesiates is always a bonus with me. I just love the way this was put together. Brilliant, brilliant work. |
| Guardrail 2007-03-18 ch 1, | Beautifully and intelligently written. I love the detail in your descriptions of everything in this poem. I really like this a lot. Great work, keep writing. And thanks so much for your review! |
| MarvellousMarvin 2007-03-17 ch 1, | i really like this! i really like all the greek myths - especially troy. the imagery here is really nice, really efective too. thanks for the review |