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Reviews For: God's Weapon: Repost

BloodTyphoon
2007-12-01
ch 1,
Hey, I know it's been a while, been doing stuff, sorry for the long absence. Anyway, I've checked out this first chapter that you re-did. So, I definitely like it, and I can see the improvements you've made upon the characters early on, and that's awesome. It's very good overall development, and I can't wait to read the rest of it. Nice work.
Crewger
2007-03-16
ch 1,
Just some grammar problems, other than that, you have very good character development
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