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   Setsuna529 8/4/07 . chapter 1Bright and cheery... a vivid little scene. |
| felicia13 5/3/07 . chapter 1 Cute, Sherry. Really cute. But I suppose light-hearted things must be written to counteract the heavier ones. Brings a smile to my face like the temperature drop on balmy summer evenings right before it rains ... Felicia. |
| Ajna 3/20/07 . chapter 1 Absolutely adorable! I love the light feel of the poem, and the way you wrote it, I feel almost as if I'm part of this scene. Gorgeous, this goes on my favorites! |
| Lisa98 3/16/07 . chapter 1 beautiful beautiful beautiful ! |
| teh tarik 3/16/07 . chapter 1 *pink easter dress* is the most cheerful image i've visualised in a long time. i love the whole atmosphere and tone of your poem - it just shines. |
