Beautiful and sad... written in a lovely way.

Aww. D:

That's depressing.. cute story, however, but the ending was sad. I guess the truly sad detail is the truth in it all. -sighs-

Well.. I see also that you haven't updated in awhile. I hope you do soon. I miss reading your stuff. ^_^

I like this... its such a sad story and beautifully written.. the rhyming is wonderful... amazing piece

aw, shucks, what a sad ending. but i like the twist of it. that he got into a car accident. nicely done!

Hmm, interesting. So who is this guy?

That was really good. When I read something like that and I actually get feelings from it, it shows how good the writer really is. And that doesnt happen to me very often but yours did. Good job

that was beautiful.