Thanks for the review, malarkeyism! Boy, that was a fast response.

This is wonderful. I love the imagery, and the line lengths are perfect. I particularly like the last line of the second stanza.

I can't tell exactly what it's about...I know it's a classroom, but is it meant to be a specific kind of classroom? I'm just wondering. Anyway, it doesn't really matter, because the concepts get through. Very good work!