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| lildream86 2008-05-04 ch 1, | you know he will never leave your side, we might feel that he is gone but in fact he is just 1 step away form us..i thought i would let u know, my dear friend.. |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-03-17 ch 1, | While I like the writing (my religion is just a bit different, though), the last line should probably have a comma before God. Okay. Yeah. So I like it. It's got a nice flow to it and all... =) |