Reviews for A Search and A Struggle

Reviews For: A Search and A Struggle

dawn9800 2008-04-15 ch 8,	abuseOh I cant wait to see what happens!! Hope you update soon!
Emilyne Willowar 2007-11-11 ch 8,	abuseUgh, I was sick, and now I've been working on NaNoWriMo. Which is why I'm only getting to this now. “Isen, could you give Esme and I some time to talk?" It's actually "me" here, because if you take out "Esme", what makes more sense? (This works for just about anything. It's English, so I'm not making any guarantees. ;-)) "Isen was in a fine mad." Um, what? I was going to say that I hope that she falls. But I guess that would be a little mean. It would be funny, though.
Emilyne Willowar 2007-10-06 ch 7,	abuse"She’d gotten a tree, how she had gotten a tree onto his ship without his noticing was completely beyond him, but she’d done it. " The same way someone got a couch into the dorm, of course: magic. ;) (Actually, they used the elevator. But I like magic better. =D) Ooh, love the ending. It's so...ominous. I think things are going to be heating up pretty soon. It's okay, about not knowing what to do with the party scenes. Not having been to a party ever (and not planning to, either), I just had my character hang out in the bathroom reading magazines the whole time. Luckily, it was in character for her, since she was a bit odd, anyway...
Kayla Christine 2007-10-04 ch 1,	abuseLizzy!! Ah!! A sequel!! I'm in shock... how is it possible that I didn't even know about it? hm? My school email was down, that's how. But anywho... OH MY GOD! First chapter and I love it already. If I had more time I'd read it all, right now. but I don't. Oh, catch up on Chasing Princces Love! It's not very far since you left it. I was hiding. Glad to hear from you, Kayla
Emilyne Willowar 2007-09-19 ch 6,	abuseIt jumped around a little, but not too much. I can't wait for the next one!
Emilyne Willowar 2007-09-04 ch 5,	abuse"Still wobbling horribly and clutching Roarke’s arm tightly, he led her up and onto the quarterdeck." It sounds like you're talking about Roarke in the first part of the sentence, even though I know you're not. "You’ll pull your wait." You want "weight" here. A thought just occurred to me. If they're on the sea, will they end up visiting any of the other continents? We know the former U.S. and Canada (?) are still around, but what ever became of the other countries? I really like Kemen for some reason. Maybe it's because he didn't hesitate to treat Isen like a real person. I dunno. I'm glad Isen actually seems like a real person, though, with flaws, instead of just another cut-out. Oh man, I love Vidar. He reminded me a lot of myself. I'm a little slow... Another good chapter. I'm glad Isen doesn't completely hate Roarke now. Please update soon, it's 3 weeks until I leave for school and I'm really, really bored.
Emilyne Willowar 2007-08-02 ch 4,	abuseThis chapter looks lonely. I hate it when people don't review my stuff (especially my stories, ugh), so I'll help you out. =) I like how the story's starting to move along now. "...the small man replied, angrily waving her hands." Um..."his hands"? I couldn't tell that you don't know much about ships. But maybe that's because I don't know anything, either. Yay! I'm all caught up! So I'll be putting this on my alerts now, and I hope you update soon!
Emilyne Willowar 2007-08-02 ch 3,	abuseI feel smart again. =) But I guess you weren't trying to keep it a huge secret that Isen was one of the three, so it's already wearing off.
Emilyne Willowar 2007-08-02 ch 2,	abuseWhat did Roarke do to her? (Yes, I know you're going to get into that, but I thought I'd join the club and voice the thought. =P) I'm so glad Lynn and James got together. I would've been very displeased if they hadn't.
Emilyne Willowar 2007-08-02 ch 1,	abuse"...red bird on her windowsill." Silaqui again? I'm guessing Isen is one of the three, then? "The woman was a sorceress, a seeress, one who knew more than she could ever hope to. The woman was a seeress, known far and wide for her visions and prophesies." Probably take "seeress" out of the first sentence, if you want to use the second sentence. Wow. Isen is so different from Lynn. It's going to take some getting used to...
Micky 2007-07-11 ch 3, anon.	abuseI really love how you are using the sequal to explain what happens between Isen and Roarke. I am excited to read more, even excited enough to wait as long as it will take because of your schools virus. I agree and dissagree with rose blossom. I think that it is too predictable that all 3 sisters are the chosen ones but it would also make sense that they grew up together and each holds different talents. It would be awful to introduce a character that the readers of lady in black would not be familiar with if you didn't chose rose as the 3rd chosen one.
Rose Blossom 2007-03-29 ch 3, anon.	abuseI hope the third isn't Rose...if the sisters were the three that would be too predictable xD Love it so far
the flaming river 2007-03-28 ch 3,	abuseWell i think the third is rose. I don't think the chapter was rushed or anything. I liked it although it is kind of wierd that the mother knew that the war would be soon when the queen did not, but maybe you can fix that. Other than that, great job! Keep writing.
the flaming river 2007-03-20 ch 2,	abuseIt is very interesting how you described Roarke as not being stubborn enough. Also in this book, you give a lot more detail to the appearance of the characters. I like that. Well, keep writing. Post soon
the flaming river 2007-03-18 ch 1,	abuseso we're finally going to learn what happened between Isen and Roarke right? Well if you don't I am going to murder you in your sleep. This is really good. It draws upon the other story, giving it more depth. I like it so far. Keep writing.

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