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| Amarone. 2008-07-14 ch 1,  | abuseWow, I'm pretty much speechless. Brilliant writing piece, I really loved it. I'm sort of rummaging around for criticism, but I'm having as much luck as finding a needle in a messy haystack. Really nicely written, and well done. A definite fav~ |
| girls will be boys 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abusethis is funny, in that dark, sorta tragic kinda way. it's like laughing and crying at the same time, if that makes sense. i liked the way you presented it. :) |
| this requires pants 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuse... Awesome. Love the dark humor. |
| AyumiYuy 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseDepressing and sad, but creatively done. =) |
| Samiii 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseRight, so I pretty much loved that. I don't like second-perosn, but it was necessary for this story and you used it excellently. I enjoyed the sarcastic, almost condescending and disapproving tone. Work like this often becomes tedious after the first few paragraphs, but you managed to keep my excited and intereted throughout the whole thing. One or two grammar errors, but overall the mechanics, as well as writing style and overall quality, were wonderful. 9.5//10 -Sami |
| Kavita Najim 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseI love this. I find my self rereading it when I feel uninspired. Be Scene is truly amazing. |
| Iced Tea Junkie 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseI. Adore. This. Definitely going on the favorites list! Peace, Love, and Iced Tea, Iced Tea Junkie !SRETRAUQ DAER! |
| Yukeh 2007-08-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseo_o Ah, I liked this a lot. It was easy to read and it flowed nicely, I think. |
| Net 2007-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is trip, dude. Loved it. Haha. |
| cobwebbed eyes. 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abusewow. just wow. |
| Jaded Panic 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abusewow. this was completely and totally awesome. i was smirking in the first few paragraphs, but that really fell away as the story started getting steadily darker... you really had me hooked. the ending was very satisfying...i like that it's almost open ended, to where you're not sure if this is the best for the girl or not. but that might just be my brain's weird thinking. anyway, bottom line, this is great. amazing job. :) -jaded- |
| Feel The Waltz 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuseWow, i was just profile jumping around until i found this gem of a short story. You portrayed "The Scene" so perfectly that its almost scary. I liked the dry humour & sarcastic narrative throughout the story. Its rare that i find a short story that i enjoy this much so congrats for making such an amazing one :] |
| distorted reality x 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abuseWow. It's so true it's scary. I know so many people like that and you capture them perfectly. Love it. |
| SadHappyFace 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is really amazing! I really really like it! You are a very awesome author! |
| Jaye-Marie 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abuseVery impressive! And so true. I know plenty of people who are that description so much that they would think your writing is meant to be taken 100% seriously. Great job. |