*shivers* Um, hard for me since I don't agree with it at all. But anyhow, nicely writen I suppose.

Thanks for the review and the fave!

Rowan.

I really liked it. The whole idea. Some of the lines didn't flow but it might have been the way I was reading. Keep writing. God Bless! :)

I love this. It flows really well and the rhymes don't sound forced. You did an excellent job with this piece!

Thanks for the reviews!

Amen! Beautifully done. Excellent write! Write on and God Bless you.

THat was super awesome. hey it says you aren't on we can talk through