Again, wow! You are an amazing poet. This one is very lyrical. Did you have a tune for it running through your head when you first penned it?

i love this. the repetition is perfect and your pain is so clear.

just gorgeous.

I love the love-story that you tell throughout this - both with the 'him' and the angel protaganist. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.

That was a sad song. It was well written and I really form the images of an angel's wings being broken off.

SirScott

I loved how the chorus changed at the end, nicely done. The rhyming seemed a little unatural at times, but it was well written.

Rowan.