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| ode to a firefly 2007-03-17 ch 1,   | I know the feeling of those last two lines so well. It makes me feel guilty for not keeping up my journal. =P ♥Christine |
| Nyte Shade 2007-03-16 ch 1, | Really good and descriptive...good job |
| PM20 2007-03-16 ch 1, | Wonderful poem, I love how you contrast the snow with the fiery rage in her soul, and how snow is carried throughout the whole poem, it gives it nice cohesion. The only line that seemed out of place was the one comparing being covered in snow to the candy shell of an M&M, just because snow is usually light and fluffy and M&M shells are hard and smooth. Anyway, lovely poem and thank you for sharing. |