BEAUTIFUL I LIKE YOUR STYLE OF WRITING

Wonderful story, the imagery was great. I could tell right from the beginning I was going to enjoy the story, however I did get skeptical when it flashed to him being back home with Kate, and I was hoping that it wasn't going to end that way, because that would be kinda cheesey and cliche, "it was all a dream, everything is really okay." So I was glad when it went back to him in the cave and ended on such a tragic note. I like how I still wonder what happend to him, but I am still content with the ending, well done. Thank you for sharing.