I love this poem it's really good

Yay! You are back! *does dance*. Sorry it took me a while to review, so many stupid things going on! Anyway, this was beautiful. I can really relate. Our pasts are always haunting us, of what we have done. We are always afraid that someone will find out who we truly are, and then hate us. Wonderful job.

That's very powerful. I love it, especially the chorus. Did you actually compose music to go along with this? If you did, that makes it even more amazing... Great job.

I like it...but there are just maybe a couple of things that I would change. But it is still very good!