It's cute :)

Super cute and I really like the different approach that you used! Great job! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

Bubbly Girl

So cute! (Although cute might not be what you want to hear.) I like it. It's a different to attack a tried and true storyline. Love it :)

AW! The ending just made me go "so swet!" like a happy little girl. This is such a nice one-shot! And the length's just right. Great job!:)

I am absolutely in love with this.

I'm glad you chose to use a happy ending for this :) otherwise it wouldn't be such a nice story

WHE! Great story!

xx

Oh my. Absolutely beautiful. Some people try so hard to write simply yet beautifully, but fail misery. You, my dear, have succeeded in making it look effortless. You conjure perfect images of your characters in the readers' head, using only a half of a line.

Simply amazing.

Well...At first I was confused with the second person thing but I got it figured out. Well, it's nice to have a guy's POV I suppose. It's cute. Real cute. So happy for them, really I am. Hey, I just rhymed. Ahem. Anyways. good job, it was short but nice.

Wow! Very nice, I love how you told it all in a very simple and lovely way...

Congratulations!

Lucky that i read the happy ending one then eh? I like happy endings.

sweet

one word.

beautiful.

aw ) he told her in the end which is good. haha.

That was very pretty. Second person gets me confused alot, but it was still very nice.

R.