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| Fer 2008-03-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! Very nice, I love how you told it all in a very simple and lovely way... Congratulations! |
| forever. 2008-01-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseLucky that i read the happy ending one then eh? I like happy endings. |
| SparklingStar25 2007-12-17 ch 1,  | abusesweet |
| Singingperson 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseone word. beautiful. |
| x3life 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseaw =) he told her in the end which is good. haha. |
| Dream that was Life 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was very pretty. Second person gets me confused alot, but it was still very nice. R. |
| elisefey 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done; excellent use of first person and the ending was sweet but not disgustingly so. It was just right for the narrative voice you were creating. :) Second person is tricky - not hard just a little tricky - but you used it to its best here. |
| Lily Llynn 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseAh confusing... just writing this seems challenging. Congrats on a cute story; I loved it! (: *adds to c2* |
| katie valentine 2007-09-11 ch 1, | abuseah interesting! sigh. this is kinda swet yo. :] |
| selkiewings 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseSuch a lovely read. :) |
| jekodama 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseAw! LOVELY! It made smile through the whole thing! |
| tstj 2007-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseSweet one-shot. Made me want to fall in love with Vance if his heart wasn't taken already. |
| jammi 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseJ'adore this. It was really cute and fluffy and I like the fact that we got it from the point of view of a guy AND the fact that it was in second person. Great job :) |
| britty-tt 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is story is real cute and sweet. Reminds me of why I love one shots...you don't have to wait for the 10th or 20th chapter for them to get together! |
| Cherry.SKoW 2007-06-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseCongratulations! Your masterpiece has been nominated for the Best One-Shot award at SKoW! |