Reviews for Experiment One - FictionPress.com

Anon. 2007-06-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseThe intentional improper use of "your" made me chuckle.
Erin Lynn 2007-05-28 ch 1,	abuseHaha. Total teenage angst! I love it. lol.
Ashelin 2007-03-25 ch 1,	abuseWell, it was interesting. No offense intended, but I'm not sure teenage angst is your thing. Unless you meant for it to sound a little over the top, then it was hilarious. Great job nonetheless.
Ironic Presence 2007-03-20 ch 1,	abuseHm... interesting... normally, I would comment on grammar and spelling mistakes, but those are intentional. "You’ll just leave me to bleed in my own blood" I don't know why, but I initially found that line somewhat humorous... probably because it seemed redundant, I think. I do like this line: "You’re eyes shine like stars and your mouth is pretty" ...for some reason. Maybe its simplicity. I haven't really read enough of your work to know what exactly is your norm, but I think you captured the girl's character well.
Slightly Bruised And Broken 2007-03-17 ch 1,	abusei like it. it's strong...