Reviews for The Irish Beauty - FictionPress.com

guess who's back babies 2007-05-01 ch 1,	You should have hit enter and spaced this out a little more. It was hard to read justlikewhensomeonedoesn'tusethespacebuttonwhilethey'retyping. Know what I mean? Also Irish people rarely have green eyes. I got my green eyes from my Swedish and German heritage; not my Irish though you got the pale skin right. Auburn hair is not the common among Irish people either so she is relatively normal with her black hair, paleness and freckles. Auburn hair + green eyes= very, very rare =not a common feature in people= not what Irish people usually have as features= you might want to change her character a little Either way I like the idea and her narration.
tornangelwings 2007-03-17 ch 3,	ok i freaking love this. im irish so i like it. i would suggest making who's talking and who the person is talking about ore specific. but yeah keep it up PLEASE. well yeah update soon
reelqueen119 2007-03-17 ch 2,	That was very good! Continue Please!