 Sercus Kaynine 2007-03-23 . chapter 4Sorry I took so long to review! The reviews history page didn't say you updated.
Anyway, I liked this one. Sometimes, in the other ones, I got a little confused and had to re-read some parts. This one was pretty clear the first time through.
Keep writing. |
 Rae Bauer 2007-03-21 . chapter 4It's good mystery story, short, not too complicated, and has a nice little moral there at the end.
There are a few simple spelling errors (although I should be the last one to talk) and the reason Mr. Merryl was ruled out doesn't hold much water as he could have placed the ladder, climbed it, and killed Mr. Galatica in one trip. In fact, the whole bit with the ladder was confusing- wouldn't suspicion have been aroused as soon as Merryl reported a dead body that was behind a locked door, and therefore one he couldn't have seen?
None the less, it was very good. Mysteries are hard to do. |
 Sercus Kaynine 2007-03-19 . chapter 2You know, I like to be original, so if I ever write a magic story, it'll probably be about magic hats and card tricks. So, naturally, I am enjoying this story very much.
Sadly, you left me with a cliff hanger, and as hard as I try I can't figure it out... Geez, this is going to be nagging me...
Please update soon! |
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