Reviews for Three on the Hour

stained blue 2008-04-03 ch 1,	abusethis is beautiful, and it's not written in the ** angsty way i write either, just beautiful, and i adore the way you format it; it's so simple, lovely.
dawnimoya 2008-03-19 ch 1,	abusei loved the style of this poem, though the rhyming was a little inconsistent, which broke the flow abit. other than that, i love it! :DD
Lisa98 2007-03-17 ch 1,	abuseI definately enjoyed this poem. not heart wrenching like so many that i read but nice and it made me smile I enjoyed the easy going way i feel about it but it isn't ditzy either it is with care. different and nice fine job : )
hey maria 2007-03-17 ch 1,	abuseI liked the structure a lot, but I would suggest sticking to the rhyme scheme throughout the whole poem. Nice job.