Lovely imagery.

thats good but i gotta say the part of it were creppy very creepy "sleeping ,breathing ,dreaming ... but thats what makes it good keep p the good work

cute [♥]

last stanza so pretty *grins* lovely metaphors. nice work.

I got butterflies reading this...I like how you used aspects of each of the four seasons and embodied them in the narrator. Nice job!

Another beautiful one, the language is just great. The second stanza is my favorite.

i love the entire last stanza. it makes me smile.

This is beautifully unique in it's own way. I guess this just appealed to me, because it just spoke, the only way that good poems can. Love it. Keep up the good work.

It's kind of cute, in a sense. It's done well, with good descriptions but enough reality to it that it's nice. Good job.