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Gen Eliz
2008-02-19
ch 1,
abuseStarted to get creepy at the end of the third line. It totally gave me the chills. "They stand and grimace and sneer at my stupidity" is a great line :)
The Intelligent Designer
2007-04-16
ch 1,
abuseWow, gory!! Cool though. Is there more? I'm like, totally freaked out by this, great job!
Anne Ivy
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abuseIt's an interesting idea, the question is was there, is there more is is that it? You can find a lot of good starts from something like this.
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