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| Gen Eliz 2008-02-19 ch 1,  | abuseStarted to get creepy at the end of the third line. It totally gave me the chills. "They stand and grimace and sneer at my stupidity" is a great line :) |
| The Intelligent Designer 2007-04-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, gory!! Cool though. Is there more? I'm like, totally freaked out by this, great job! |
| Anne Ivy 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuseIt's an interesting idea, the question is was there, is there more is is that it? You can find a lot of good starts from something like this. |