A teacher of mine told me last year that there was no such thing as unconditional love and it made me grow up. The emotions in this are just amazing, a little sad and ironic at the same time. Take care.

and this is every middle class tragedy trying to re-find the american dream.
basically brilliant on your part.

the whole last "stanza" of it,
from "you're all sobered up" til the end,
was amazing and did a great job of holding up the sarcastic/all-knowing voice that ran through this.

Danke.

That was really compelling. I especially liked the title, it drew me in but my attention never wavered till the end when I wished there was more.