This was written well. A lot of anger in this piece. Uncalled seems to fit this piece well!

Later
Sadistikal

break up? there was a lot of anger in this piece. as though you know that you're angry, but you are telling youself that you aren't aloud to feel that way. that is how it sounds to me.

the style wasn't really appealing to me. but it was good for how you wrote it.

thank you for the reviews. you were absolutely correct about shards nd i'm busy playing life, please leave a message. thanks.
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Wow. I think this would make a pretty cool song. But...were you thinking of anyone in particular when you wrote this? *shrug* just wondering...:/

Hey! I am really sorry about yesterday. I don't know how to delete reviews. How do u do that? If I know how I will take it off, but I really don't know how. I was rude and I am sorry for it. I do like ur poem as well. I did think you where someone else. Really I am sorry about this. Um... I will try to see if I can delete that review. If you know how please tell me. Other than that I will try to figure that out. Sorry once again.

If you don't like my work then please don't read it. I am going to block you now. Best Wishes! I don't believe that your poem is any better than mine.

Now *you're* gone, I'm glad.

Sorry, hate to be a "Grammar Nazi"... but it happens. I enjoyed this though. It had a real flow to it. Thanks for writing something so good...

Write On!