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Midnight In Eden 2007-03-17 . chapter 1
I quite like this. Complete things though, what's with the bracket before the italicized section? I think a mistake? Also I'm unsure about the "and" before truth in the third section. I don't think it's at all necessary, it's actually more jarring than anything else.

Otehrwise, nice work.

.:midnight;>
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