Reviews for The pathway to glory

Mad Mistress of Death
2007-04-11
ch 3,

abuseI love it!! please update soon with a longer chapter pleaze!

Bluemauve
2007-03-18
ch 1,

abuseYou have a few grammatical and spelling errors which detract from the story and make it seem a bit more awkward than it should be to read. The premise of this story--a rough-edged agent assigned to guard the daughter of someone important-- is done often, but not to the point where you can't make your version original. You have a bit of humor there, which is good to see, and I'm interested in reading more. My only suggestions would be to read a few novels and observe the grammar and dialog format, and try to apply that to your own work.

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