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Wolf's Night 2007-03-25 . chapter 1
Something tells me your talking about Allie when you say 'you'? If so ur not like her, she does it cuz she can. You don't know what you do...

anyways cool poem.
Dani P 2007-03-18 . chapter 1
o i like..and yes you are like allie i swear ;-P.
CountLuciferLeviathan 2007-03-17 . chapter 1
...i'm in awe with this piece, it states the truth of humankind, that their number one fear is the truth. i really love this poem.

-Lucifer Leviathan
eldoronian 2007-03-17 . chapter 1
I liked your repetition of the main theme, and how the last two lines broke that pattern. This gave the ending emphasis. Good rhythm, also. Keep it up!

-Rachel
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