That was adorable and well written. I'm surprised you don't have more reviews. But one shots generally don't. Anyway i think you should continue writing!

How enertaining! I love it! (Wow, it's taken me forever to getting around and reviewing. Cue the trumpets and fanfare! W00t, w00t! :D) Anywho... I love how she is imperfect-- a flawless Mary Sue gets really, really old really, really fast. So, kudos to you! Huzzah!

I enjoy this. Really I do. And I am way too tired to do one of my usual, uber-lengthy reviews, so... yeah. I still love it though! Feel my love! -sends love rays... and a cookie for effect-

Ta-ta!
Espionage In My Shoe

This was really cute, especially the 'real tousled black hair' and 'I was wondering when you would stop me' lines. The 'seductresses can't look dead' and 'secret lovers never go out of style' lines were really sweet though a little corny, but the best romance has to have corny lines.

LOVE THIS STORY

*sigh* That was so...cute!
Haha! I love the part where she goes all panicky about the lingerie. I don't know why, I just started giggling at that.

“Everybody likes vampires,” I told myself firmly.

I giggled, stupidly, wondering how amazing it was that I’d actually snagged a man with real tousled black hair.

Absolutely love those lines. Especially the 'real tousled black hair' one.
I think this is a wonderful entry for the ficathon. Even better that your's is complete. Mine isn't. It's got three chapters up and over 30 words but it probably won't be REALLY complete for a while.
Well...I'm going to keep my eye on you. See what you come up with next *grins*

~Spaz

this is such a cute story! I loved it!

“I love you, and your stupid paranoia, and your borderline OCD, and your refusal to have sex on weeknights, and the way you’ll start laughing hysterically whenever your panicking, and bake obsessively when your upset, and dance around in your black lace underwear after we have ice cream, a-“

That part probably made me love the story instead of like.

Great job =]