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| JojoAnn 2007-08-31 ch 1,  | abuseThat was intense. I loved the second paragraph of the story. You completely captured my mind there for the entire length of this. It was really, really good. And mysterious. Really great job! |
| wandless 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was ... scary? Disturbing? Both good words to use. Great story, it made me think, which is always nice! |