i bought the book in fourth grade..its somewhere lost in my attic..O_O i forgot to read it. hahaha.. i had suspicions laurel was seth's sister! update soon!

Haha, I knew that Laurel was his sister, not his girlfriend. What are the odds that the book would be the same one that she just finished...

YUSS!

That was awesome, as usual. Laurel is a cute name. :D

Just, ugh! Update soon. I love this story. With every fiber of my being. xD And yes. I was superglad that this chapter was longer.

Right. Well, I'll gush more once the next chapter is out. :D

Loves,

Sally Can Wait

That was fast like right after i reviewed you updated! It was so awesome, but it freak me out a little until i remembered that i'd reviewed a few days after that chapter was posted and i was like 'ah i'm being a dork again'. so yea great chapter and update soon please! ( i know i'll try to lay off the sugar so i'm not a complete weirdo, sorry!) Laters

Kelly Melly

hello again! pretty good chap, she's got some good taste in books too. i love all the books in this chap so i kinda feel like a dork but i don't care because i love reading! ok enough rambling for me so uppdate soon Please! Laters

Kelly Melly

I have a guilty pleasure for chick lit like she does. It and fantasy are probably my favorite kind of books but I'm open to anything. Seth - I'm not sure if I mentioned this - is also, like, my second favorite boy's name. Ryan's my first favorite guy's name. I love it oh so much. Haha. Okay, and I guess I have to say good luck about college and everything! This school year is going so fast. I'm going to be a junior next year. And; I can't wait for some updates. You've actually always been one of my favorite FP authors. Oh, and I almost forgot to mention that I, like many, many, others like Carrie's favorite book. Honestly, who couldn't like Ella Enchanted? It's amazing.

keep up the good work!

u picked a good main character, revey relatable to the majority of readers on fictionpress.

i cant wait to see where u are gona take this

Seth is a little strange, but then again, so is Carrie, so yeah, they work ;)

I like your story, and I'd like to see where this goes... :)

loved teh chappy! update soon!

Chrys

I prefer ITG to DDR, but I just laughed aloud when you brought it in. I mean, where I live, only crazy geeks play DDR, nevermind being good at it. Still, it's a great game, thought I hate the butterfly song. I want to kill the composer.

-Kat

I like it!

i love Girl With The Pearl Earring

Scarlett Johanssen is pretty, but she's not THAT great

i've watched Eragon and Lord Of The Rings, but never got the time to read the books

and i've seen Ella Enchanted,

it looks pretty cool so maybe i'll read the book.

i like it so far

but im truly curious as to why Seth is interested in her

i mean...it can't be because of where she works...can it?

can't wait for the next one

izzie

"It had a stupid female character looking for love and somehow landing some hot guy she had nothing in common with. Then, the two of them proceeded to have an entirely physical relationship because they had nothing in common and therefore nothing to talk about."

Yeah, okay, that was really long and stuff. But LOL. Excuse me while I die laughing. Ah, life. :]. The only thing you could possibly improve would be to MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER! I want mo'. :D

Loves,

Sally Can Wait

yay! i like this story! it's cute. lol. seth sounds like one of those guys with a short attention span, but overall- i like this story and i can't wait for the next update!_

I really liked your story. )

I'm quite the bookworm myself and rather quiet, I can totally relate to Carrie. Heh.

And Ella Enchanted was my favorite book when I was younger. I've read it over and over again. Well! Have a nice spring break and great work!

- Catee