FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Silver Moon Glow 2008-10-06 ch 12,  | abuseAh ha ha ha! I loved it! It served the bloody bastard right! |
| LettyR 2008-10-06 ch 12, | abuseGreat Story! Can't wait to read the next chapters! I absolutely love Eclipse! He's the Best! XOX Letty |
| Mistress DragonFlame 2008-10-05 ch 12, | abuseI love that, 'You scare me'. But, I have to say, Ella and Alex don't seem to have a... 'real' relationship. It seems... fake, almost, in this chapter. |
| LondonLi 2008-10-05 ch 12, anon. | abuseGreat chapter! I don't get Alex's logic though; even if what they are discussing could place them all in danger, the fact is that Ella's on the council. Whoever their enemy is, they would assume that Ella already had that info too! Keeping her out of the loop wouldn't clue an outsider in! I also love Madison in this! Thanks for all of the updates! |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-10-05 ch 12, | abusegreat work again. i love the ending with Madison. please update again soon. |
| Hannah C. Thaw 2008-10-05 ch 12, | abuseHa ha ha, silly Madison. I still can't believe Ella lost her temper. I think this is a first. Well good for her! Alex kind of deserved it. |
| JustAnotherLibroLover 2008-10-05 ch 12, anon. | abuseyou can't just leave off there! i needsez more drama! and fae too por favor! hee hee, can't wait for your next chapter! |
| Gwargedd-Annwn13 2008-10-05 ch 12, | abuseLove this chapter x3 |
| Gwargedd-Annwn13 2008-10-04 ch 11, | abuseI must say I can't wait to see what Ella does *grins* |
| Beautiful Pixie 2008-10-04 ch 11, | abuseI love this story, I read uncharmed and went directly into this, LOVE IT. |
| Silver Moon Glow 2008-09-29 ch 11, | abuseAha ha ha ha! I love it! The only thing that is bugging me right now is the cliff hanger! I REALLY want to find out what happens next! I've also noticed that your chapters seem to be getting a little shorter... I didn't know if you had noticed or not. Also is Ella getting a little more short tempered? (Especially in this chapter.) Or is it just me. I can't wait for the next chapter! I really want to find out what happens when Ella 'snaps'. |
| Mistress DragonFlame 2008-09-29 ch 11, | abuseHm, a little abrupt with the stalker-guy, and then it ends rather...stupidly, to phrase it simply. It's similar to having a kitten hissing and spitting at something--more impressive when it's an adult, but kinda stupid and a little surprising when it's big, watery-eyed, fluffy, and the size of my hand. |
| LondonLi 2008-09-29 ch 11, anon. | abuseI'm impressed to see her backbone continually shown; she is such a great strong character! Thanks for the update; I'd like to see what the big secret is! |
| Searbear 2008-09-28 ch 11, | abuseWow! I just realised I haven't been checking on this story, :P lol anyway it's great and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| JustAnotherLibroLover 2008-09-28 ch 11, | abuseAh! Tsk tsk! You leave off like that!?! Make me all anxious for the next chap! Loved the whole fae intro, hee hee, it was cute. Can't wait to see what you make of Ella's snap, and green guy, and the fae guy too! Please update soon! |