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| Ironic Presence 2007-03-18 ch 1, | Very dark poem, very true. I like the opening line and the last two: "Our world is but a shadow"..."But when it is time to stand and see our flaws/It will be too late". Keep writing! |
| Hidden Sword of Truth 2007-03-18 ch 1, | This is very deep and dark. Death is the end of life, but I would like to add this to my C2! Best Wishes! (TSP) |