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Reviews For: Death Dealers

Ironic Presence
2007-03-18
ch 1,
Very dark poem, very true. I like the opening line and the last two:
"Our world is but a shadow"..."But when it is time to stand and see our flaws/It will be too late".
Keep writing!
Hidden Sword of Truth
2007-03-18
ch 1,
This is very deep and dark. Death is the end of life, but I would like to add this to my C2!

Best Wishes!

(TSP)
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