This was a very good read. I thought that Amaryllis wasn't too bright not telling her loved ones what she was up to. Oh well-it all worked out for everyone in the end :)

I love this story so much!

YAY PREETY FAIRY BOYS! hehehe Alhough... the rainbowness WUZ a little cheezy lol! SO CUTE!

-dies of happiness- My god, i wish someone would draw a picture of this. afhiuewfiurebge3iug

That was satisfying. Everything just fell into place at the end. Amaryllis might have been powerful, but she doesn't seem all that clever.

Rain should have been wearing a shift (chemise, cote, etc.) under that corset because a shift can be washed and a corset can't, but I guess none of the dresses needed washing anyway. Maybe Amaryllis had a spell on her clothes to keep them clean.

I wonder whether Hyacinth will simply move in. Will they tell the populous that Rain pretended to be Amaryllis for all those years or let them think what that the queen is just now abdicating?

Anyway, Rain can look forward to warm breakfasts from now on.

Amazing fantastic splendid good!

Wow, that was really long, it took me like an hour to read, but it was so worth it. Incredably beautiful and descriptive. Rain is such a cute character! And he makes a great Queen XD

Most of the time oneshots are kind of lacking in point or plot but you did a really good job keeping the main plot and a few side stories interesting and then tying them all together at the end. Beautiful job!

HAH! This was supposed to be a quick read. Now I'm hobbling off to bed at near 5:30 a.m. You are bad for my sleep habits! A few tense issues here and there but still a delightful read.

~Centi

Aw, so sweet. I feel like I've fallen into this fairy universe you've constructed. Really magical.

-squeals- This is the sweetest story I have ever read! Oh I love it more then any other! I wish the story was longer so that I could have enjoyed it longer lol. What a beautiful tale to read!

aw!
rain's adorabubble.
he is the best queen ever,
and one of those genuinely nice people!

This is, once again, a great story

Your stories are so hidiously devoid of review, it's gastly! I love these stories so much, I spent every free moment trying to get through them just so I can go on to the next!

You have a lovely style that isn't simple but isn't too wordy. And perfect little mini plots to fit into oneshots for the reader on the go!

I love this setting, lets the little girl in me want to run in a field prancing with Hyacinth and Rain. :DD

xD I hate to see good stories so neglected. Mostly because mine are too. Lol

Keep writing and I'll keep reading :D

This was yet another really good story. I'd say more but there isn't alot I can say that hasn't already been said. Anyways, keep up the good work!

Hm. I enjoyed that. I think you did a good job of having crossdressing while still retaining some masculinity to the character. I have to say that I *hate* it when slash fiction writers make their uke so incredibly girly. At least here he was thinking about sex and crap for all that first part. xD

I enjoyed the world, but I think there could've been more description for some stuff. Maybe just the kobolds and the poison wyrms. Mainly the kobolds since I have no idea what they would look like. o.o

But yeah, not bad. I enjoyed it. I think I'll be favoriting this story. n_n It was a good read.