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| lolitadoll 2008-01-18 ch 1,   | haha loved it! |
| Kolostramin 2007-03-20 ch 1, | For a moment when I read this, I thought something horrible was going to happen--i.e., someone was going to die at the end. But no, it just ended. There's a surprising amount of philosophy here for this short of a piece. And I liked the ending irony. As for feeling like writing...yeah. That's your choice. I do hope you get back to it though. Considering how much is in this little story and the other I read, you've got talent. There's my compliment for the day. K. Stramin |
| Sundown 2007-03-19 ch 1, | interesting idea! I must say, the beginning made me laugh because i went to an all girls school and your description brought me back there...us girls are a very strange breed. Written nicely...not too long, not too short. well done |
| D.J. Tucker 2007-03-19 ch 1, | I liked how the mirror took on a sort of female form. Like it starts neutral, but spending her life in a girl's washroom turns her into a female. Very interesting, and extremely original. |
| FoxStorm 2007-03-18 ch 1, | Never read any thing from the POV of a mirror. I liked the veiw the mirrow had on the first two. Once again well done. |