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| concerto49 2007-08-14 ch 1,  | abuseHm kinda interesting, but a touch confusing. It wasn't connected as well as it could be - like a bit jumpy. Yeah feel sorry for the puppy though :( Sigh. Anyhow. Cheers. |
| xx-cronopio-xx 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseShock collars make me cry... |
| DisturbedKittenWriter 2007-03-29 ch 1, | abuseAww...poor puppy. I saw this challenge in that book of yours. It looked like fun :) This is a very good response to that. Great job as always! |
| Nyptunus 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuseAww, poor Apollo :(. He's so cuute :D. Lorved it, can't wait to hear more from Apollo and his adventures with small one! lol ;) |