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| Remember Sunday 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love this even though it's on hold. Great job. |
| makexmexspin 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abusegah! such an awesome plot in my opinion. this is really old though. will you continue it? or is it over? |
| J. Abigail 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseExcellent story. Wonderful plot, good characters, supenseful and mysterious. You kept me hooked in until your powerful conclusion. I liked it a lot, especially the small triangle you have going with Rose, Rent and Parker. JJ was funny. Great short story again! ~Abby |
| Teacake 2007-10-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThey're messed up, so very messed up, but I bet people like this exist in our society... creepy thought o_o But seriously this is really good, I like this sort of thing >> not to sound psycho or anything. I really really like Rent for some odd reason XD and Rose is such a **, Parker is so completely whipped and I'm not quite sure what to make of JJ... overall they are a strange group, all meshed together @__@ DO continue :D |
| merrymowmow 2007-05-30 ch 1, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update? |
| Creative Destruction 2007-05-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseHoly sheit! Haha. Omg. Please update. This is SO good. |
| iglooey 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abuseo...this sounds real interesting. Love the plot, very original. Please update! It's been like forever. |
| heyhoeletsgo. 2007-04-26 ch 1, anon. | abusethsi definitely needs to be updated. none of this ignoring hiatus stuff aiight? |
| catharsis7 2007-04-09 ch 1, | abuseWell... I like it. I admit, at the end of the chapter, I gasped. I kind of figured that would be the 'punishment' if someone didn't go through with the act of killing the person on their piece of paper, but still. I can just imagine Rent in a cold and indifferent tone saying that last line as well. He's my favorite. I like his attitude, at least thus far. Anyway, nice job. Hope there is an update soon. |
| Her Wishing Well 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseOMG update update! Rent is so evil. I just love your stories, where do you get the ideas from? |
| Aurorablu 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abuseOoh. Update soon! ~Sierra |
| Bleeding Air 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abusehey poopy pants. i mentioned i wrote a review for this right. and it didnt show. SO HERE'S ANOTHER ONE. it's not as cool but you'll deal. you'll deal. "Rent was the last to arrive". He'll be the last one to die too. to perish. in paris. hohoh. i'm so smart, like a nerdo. rose. oh rose. how much you screech and squawk. bawk bawk bawk. and yeah. that's all i have to say. for now. rent is the creepiest guy ever. standing in the shadows and watching his "friends". haa haa. they argue so much. AHH girls and money, guys always squabble over them eh eh. eh naffi. eh. -nudge nudge- eh. eh. silly parker is whipped for rose, who is a **. haha. and yes. the interaction with helen. lmao. rent's creepy. creepy, kk. but i like him. i do. and oo, ahh. how extreme are these kids. HOW EXTREME. now update. -fave story ness!- |
| Mellowdy 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseMessed up. They're all messed up. They should all go to rehab or something. |
| Ravene 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseInteresting characters you've got here. I like the random mixture, the differences between them, the forboding histories waiting to be revealed. And the tension ... oh its so thick :) I feel sorry for Parker though. Poor little rich boy. But Rent seems, oh so much sexier. |
| ... 2007-03-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseokay. so rent's creepy. i think my favorite is jj, solely because he seems to be the only normal one. but i don't know how he's going to react to rent's whole game, which makes me sad. i wonder how they got the money, is that going to be explained later? like what/who did they steal it from? and will rent's creepiness be explained, because that is totally the bigger question. like i liked him in the beginning but now i'm not so sure. and i still need a few more chapters before i get a feel for rose and parker. oh, and i hope the love triangle thing between rose/parker/rent is explained too. so many questions! this seems like the start of a great new story, i love it. except i'm not so sure about the killing part, but whatever, i can't wait to see what you do with it. |