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Maisha Mafuriko
2007-05-29
ch 1,
Dare Me #55...

Off the eagle soars
Lighting now follows thunder
Nest is higher yet
Tytherpol
2007-05-29
ch 3,
the ones that 'stuck' to me were: 3,9,23,53,87.
the rest were great also.
i mean, they really were very nice.
rhyddid
2007-04-30
ch 1,
I really like how you configure your ideas within the haiku form. You write it more as a thought than just the typical group of random words describing a main idea. I especially enjoyed reading blaspheme. Its subject matter was very intrigueing.
polka dots and addictions
2007-04-05
ch 1,
i really like all of these, but i think 'From Him, I Swear...' was my favourite...nicely written. thanks for the review ~Bex xx
E
2007-04-01
ch 1,
My favorites: 52, 121, 060, 942

Beautiful haikus. Wonderful contrast between the lyrical, humorous, resigned, contemplative, triumphant. Now I can see how how you managed to write Flowers of Paxi so well!
Lausell Morales
2007-03-22
ch 1,
All of the haikus-Brilliant! Beautiful! hope to see more soon!
breaktherules
2007-03-19
ch 1,
I thought all of these haiku's were beautiful and extremely well written. You seem to have a natural talent to express yourself perfectly. Kudos!
she smolders
2007-03-18
ch 1,
"Blaspheme…", left me quite speechless, and the rest were lovely too. Take care.
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