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| Maisha Mafuriko 2007-05-29 ch 1, | Dare Me #55... Off the eagle soars Lighting now follows thunder Nest is higher yet |
| Tytherpol 2007-05-29 ch 3, | the ones that 'stuck' to me were: 3,9,23,53,87. the rest were great also. i mean, they really were very nice. |
| rhyddid 2007-04-30 ch 1, | I really like how you configure your ideas within the haiku form. You write it more as a thought than just the typical group of random words describing a main idea. I especially enjoyed reading blaspheme. Its subject matter was very intrigueing. |
| polka dots and addictions 2007-04-05 ch 1, | i really like all of these, but i think 'From Him, I Swear...' was my favourite...nicely written. thanks for the review ~Bex xx |
| E 2007-04-01 ch 1, | My favorites: 52, 121, 060, 942 Beautiful haikus. Wonderful contrast between the lyrical, humorous, resigned, contemplative, triumphant. Now I can see how how you managed to write Flowers of Paxi so well! |
| Lausell Morales 2007-03-22 ch 1, | All of the haikus-Brilliant! Beautiful! hope to see more soon! |
| breaktherules 2007-03-19 ch 1, | I thought all of these haiku's were beautiful and extremely well written. You seem to have a natural talent to express yourself perfectly. Kudos! |
| she smolders 2007-03-18 ch 1, | "Blaspheme…", left me quite speechless, and the rest were lovely too. Take care. |