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| Travis C. Eckert 2007-03-19 ch 1,   | So a living bond. Pretty good. |
| SAKoi 2007-03-18 ch 1, | the words are speaking by themselves; like the phrase "today's running backward" and "softly and brightly disturbing". Very good rhythmy flow. Maybe you could enter the flux theme earlier on...but i liked it very much |