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| dreamercrys 2008-09-29 ch 79, | abuseWhy can't the just ** admit that they are in love with each other already...why... |
| SunnyXD 2008-09-27 ch 78, anon. | abuseHonestly this story both ** me off and at the same time I can't get enough of it. The romantic relationships Madison has annoy me, especially Ethan (something HAS to be worng with him, I mean no ones that perfect) with the exception of Darick (who is know my one and only favourite charcter of this drama) Then there's Brianna who I think is a greedy ** (no offense meant I just hate her) Now that I've got that worked out I will say that this has been one of the longest stories I seen on Fictionpress that has interested me and many others for far longer than I'm willing to admit. You should maybe give a thought of turning it into a screenplay and submitting it as I know many people willing to watch this play out on TV. |
| mywaywithwords 2008-09-22 ch 78, | abuseIt has literally taken forever to read through this fantastic story, but I loved it and am so sorry that I now have to actually wait for updates to be able to read on. I love all of the complex relationships between all of the characters, especially Madison and Darick, but I am sad to see Dorian out of the story in the last few chapters, I really hope he makes a return as I am not a huge fan of Ethan. The comedy in the dialogue makes the story just that much better, I couldn't stop reading it; finished from chapter one to 78 in just over three weeks I think. I did not see the twist with Madison (much earlier in the story) coming at all, I love the way the plot totally turns around. You described the story outline very well when you said it was done like a TV show, with multiple plotlines and main characters. I can't put into a review ho much I have enjoyed reading your story, even when I should be putting time into my end of year exams (I'm in Australia). Wow, this is a long review, but it is a long story. Please update so I can read on... |
| Abenaunce 2008-09-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is fantastic! I can't wait to keep reading. |
| nycgurl9014 2008-09-14 ch 77, | abuseI've been reading this story since the end of August and i am in love with it. It's like the Young and the Restless...kinda. Anyway i can't wait for the next chapter. Howd you think of this story and make it so interesting even after 77 chapters? I know i could never do thatso kudos to you! You're a great writer and i can't wait for the next chapter. |
| sara 2008-09-02 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis is an epically long story, just so you know. Anyway, I just finished chapter four, and I'm currently in love with Derick he's such an **, but at the same time hes such a cutie cause he's an ** cause he doesn't know how else to act. Its kinda adorable. Seeing as its one in the morning I have to sleep, but you can expect a review from me tommorow as well letting you know how I'm progressing with it. Love it so far! |
| aimee riddle 2008-08-28 ch 76, | abuseOk, I am completely enthralled with this series. It took me 2 weeks to read through it, because I just started back at school and moved. I am sad to be at the most recent update, because now I have to wait to see what happens. I love the way Brianna and Madison are like black holes when it comes to falling in love. I can't decide who I would most like to see them end up with. Well, Brianna, anyway. I liked Dorian, and I would love to see more of him in Madison's life. I don't know enough about Ethan yet, and I'm on the fence with Darick. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely love this story. |
| Andaluse 2008-08-27 ch 76, | abusem... Jack character become clearer in this chapter and I like Brad here... What will happen next?? |
| Andaluse 2008-08-27 ch 76, anon. | abusem… Jack character become clearer in this chapter and I like Brad here What will happen next? |
| ClaimingUntoughable 2008-08-25 ch 75, | abusehey love this song hope u can write more soon |
| Shelley 2008-08-22 ch 75, anon. | abuseReading this was the high light of my day. I love the quick updates. They make me happy :) |
| Daddy's Little Angel 2008-08-20 ch 2, | abuseThis story is realy good! Madison reminds me of my best friend...we call her Sunshine |
| ClaimingUntoughable 2008-08-18 ch 74, | abusehey i love this chapter hope u can right more soon |
| Andaluse 2008-08-12 ch 73, | abuseGood Work... |
| Shelley 2008-08-12 ch 73, anon. | abuseI am absolutely enthralled in this story. I check everyday to see if you've updated, sometimes even more than once. How much longer do you plan to make it? To be honest, I never want it to end. lol. It's so good. |