Reviews for Past the Garden Gates

Cisca Ironflame
2007-03-19
ch 1,

Well this seems like a pretty good start for a story. I can already picture what will probably happened next (but maybe you'll prove me wrong).

Anywho, good job and nice word choicing.

There were a couple grammatical errors here and there, but I won't be picky (since you did say "I know that there might be a lot of mistakes").

I hope that you will "try to up date soon." You better keep your word

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or else... *shifty eyes*

~Cisca Ironflame

miss masquerade
2007-03-18
ch 1,

That is a really good story! There are quite a few grammar errors, like you said, but the plot is intriguing.

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