Reviews for Untitled Sonnet II

R.G. Angel 2007-04-30 ch 1,	abuseI wish I could write poetry... Only the very talented can write poetry! I love your opening paragraph... You painted it very well... Keep up the wonderful work!
Ironic Presence 2007-03-20 ch 1,	abuseI think this one was better than Untitled Sonnet I, except for that one scary line with all the typos (or is it typoes?): "And our love instils within me a fea" Again, I think that it could be fine with some editing, if you so desired to return to it. I like the sentiments behind this poem, though a tad cliche (no offense).
Donny304 2007-03-20 ch 1,	abuseI liked it. It felt like I was there. Good work.
Camilleta 2007-03-18 ch 1,	abuseI so can't write like this... jealous By the way, I think you forgot the r in fear. Sorry to be annoying, but I wish people would tell me when I make typos, lol. Thanks for the R&R!
a silenced revolution 2007-03-18 ch 1,	abuseThat's pretty good, I think.