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| divinexglory 2007-10-30 ch 7,  | abuseI've read this story from the start. It's really written well. It flows nicely, has a good balance of dialogue/description, and is in general a very decent story. I love it. At first I thought it would've sounded like some sort of "Pirates of the Caribbean" type story, but you've done well to create your own ideas/pictures of pirates. Well done, can't wait to read more! |
| Ember Swish 2007-07-05 ch 8, | abuseThe summary sounded good, so I started to read it, and I couldn't stop! I can't think of anything for a correction...this is one of the best stories I've read. Good Job, and keep updating. |
| siddika 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseAMAZING STORY. |
| J 2007-06-04 ch 7, anon. | abuseA really exicting chapter! ...cna't think of what else to say... :) |
| J 2007-06-03 ch 6, anon. | abuseI liked this chapter, please write more soon. |
| divinexglory 2007-05-18 ch 5, | abusewow. that's all I can say. this is getting realy good. |
| anigurl28 2007-05-15 ch 5, | abusegood story. it's obvious who u based your pirate after though. |
| divinexglory 2007-04-19 ch 4, | abuseHahah the monkey part was cute; very interesting. "They’re spending an awfully large amount of time together. I wonder if-" I hope the friend isn't trying to...spend too much time with him as more-of-friendship, since Sandie liked Christian...hm. |
| divinexglory 2007-04-19 ch 3, | abuseHm, geting so good. For someone to whom English is not a first language, your grammar and spelling is actually very good! I believe it's better than some kids' in my school! Now, about the story; I think this Edmund guy is/was a pirate, but that's just my suspicion. Hmm. |
| Gimstan 2007-04-12 ch 4, | abuseI liked it, please write some more soon :) |
| Gimstan 2007-04-11 ch 3, | abuseGood so far. please update soon! |
| shakespearewannabe 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseWell-written story. I liked the way your characters were dazed when they discovered where they were-I would be too! That was realistic. Mainly, I think I would work on characterization. Jen is given a good amount, Christian a fair amount, but since Sandy is the main character, I think I'd give her more. |
| divinexglory 2007-03-22 ch 2, | abuseI liked this one, too. This is pretty good so far. Can't wait to read more. |
| divinexglory 2007-03-22 ch 1, | abuseWhether or not anyone likes it, depends on the person. That said; I really like this! I always liked time-travel. While reading the first part, I thought that the two "6:30's" were a typo. Haha. |