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| Otseis Ragnarok 2007-03-20 ch 1,   | I can't really say that was bad... I mean there just wasn't enough. Also, the temple part was a little strange. Lastly, that was nowhere near what could be considered 'horror'. For a rating, and I hate to do this, I give this story a TWO out of SEVEN. |