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Reviews For: Bipolar

Bloodfeeder 2008-09-07 ch 1,	Wow. This felt SO honest. I love it, I really do. Sobering, but as honest or more honest than even I could write. And you put it so CLEARLY too, like this part: 'I’m jealous that he can let me go after I supported him for so long. His wings grew in when I wasn’t looking, and he’s flying away, leaving me tethered to his cage, my fingers cramped and bloody from digging his escape route for him. I feel as if he’s leaving and not even bothering to notice that I’m standing exactly where I have always been' Wow. That's part really got me deep. Thank you for writing this. FP needs more of these types of stories. Lee
Cinera 2008-04-21 ch 1,	This story made me cry a little. It's amazing how close siblings can be.
Empty-Fishbowl 2007-07-28 ch 1,	This must have been really hard to write this. One of my brothers is bipolar, and you really made me think of it in a new way. ~Charlie
Bleed The Dream 2007-07-17 ch 1,	Sweet and lovely. I can really feel the love~ Ah...
Kizuna 2007-07-15 ch 1,	This was such a good oneshot! So sweet!;) I can't wait to read more from you!^^
Naomi Schemer 2007-03-27 ch 1,	So I'm finally reviewing this. For most of it I imagined the speaker a girl, probably because you talked about your own brother in the begining. In the end, it wasn't really a factor in the story at all. This one was almost inspiring...I constantly fight with my brother, naturally. I really liked reading this.
Initially loaded 2007-03-25 ch 1,	wow...that was so powerful...
Koba van der Lubbe 2007-03-22 ch 1,	I think overall you did a good job with this story... Just a few things; The joke about the ADD and ADHD kid, well, they're both considered the same thing now. People still sometimes make a distinction but you should point out perhaps that its incorrect. Your story really brings some interesting ideas about Bipolar disorder... I clicked on it to try and see if I could relate, and a few things I could. I've been diagnosed with ADHD too, and more recently with Bipolar disorder. You were most accurate (compaired to myself) with relation to the social impact... Its misunderstood as a scary, crippling mental illness. "I may behave strangely, but I am not insane"-Thats my belief. Why must everyone behave the same?
DragonSapphire 2007-03-21 ch 1,	That was WONDERFUL. The subject matter is so hard and real, and the connection and support these two brothers have with each other is inspiring. Beautiful work!
Nub in Denial 2007-03-19 ch 1,	This piece really touches me 'cause I have a family member, not with ADHD or Bipolar, but Psychosis. It's good to see that you love your brother a lot. I feel the same for mine, even though he's an arse who kept me up way too late last night with his gallavanting around the house.(He's not the one with Psychosis, my mom is). It's scary because I know that because of my mother's condition I'm more prone to contracting Psychosis as well. (I was getting help preventing it from my counsellor but my dad decided I couldn't go anymore 'cause he's wicked religious and found out that she supported me being bisexual.) But anyway... wow that's a lot of rambling. I hope you don't mind. Really nice piece though. The whole thing was wrapped up all tidy like a present of brotherly love. I liked it lots :] Peace, -Sandra
Mya 2007-03-19 ch 1,	Mya loved it! She read it before Xanthie posted, but reading again made it even better for her. Mya thinks there could've been a little whispers slash/incest. Very easily. ^.^ Awesome job!
OverXTheXEdge 2007-03-19 ch 1,	Hearts and Kudos for you! This story is awesome and very heart-wrenching. It hits close to home, huh? I have a niece who's ADHD so I understand those tendencies and I had a friend who was slightly bi-polar (though I do think it was more than slightly considering the fact that something like her period would set her OFF). This story is by far, one of the best that I've read on this site.
Sakru angelqueen 2007-03-18 ch 1,	A very good and heartfelt story, I liked it!
ddz008 2007-03-18 ch 1,	Really great story, it was so moving and realistic. I really liked it. Must be so tough to have a disorder like that one but at least he has someone that loves him so much :)

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