hey! once again wonderful work. i really really really liked this one. very true yet so sad. great job once agian!

rira-chan

I like this! But you cant diss Disney like that! *( They just look on the bright side and talk about the happy things in life LOL.. JK! Its still very good!

wow that was really good!

Loved this. In some ways this totally describes how I feel about the whole thing, but to say this is exactly what I think would be hypocritical. Gosh, I'm already such a hypocrite, I don't think I need to add to it. This was great, just don't forever be afraid of love. That will get you no where. Wonderful job.

I thought your poem was very well put together. What got me hooked was actually your summary. I thought it was funny but true. So nice job, and great message!