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| Ironic Presence 2007-04-05 ch 1,   | Very powerful. I can feel the seething tone, the hatred. You write very well; I hate swearing, but it adds to the venom in the words. |
| Venus Immortelle 2007-04-03 ch 1, | ouch. that was brilliant ^_^ |